In terms of layout your review is very believable and professional. However, I did come across numberous spelling and grammar mistakes. Once you sort those errors out it will become a really good review. It is short and consise so if there is anyway you can make it a little bit longer that will help to improve it but I do see how you have followed the housing style of Total film reviews.Good Job.
The layout of your film review is very similar and really realistic to the actual total film reviews as sharon previously mentioned their a a couple of grammar mistakes that you can change and also you might want to consider the fomat of your review as i naturally started to read the wrong paragraph. Good work.
In terms of layout your review is very believable and professional. However, I did come across numberous spelling and grammar mistakes. Once you sort those errors out it will become a really good review. It is short and consise so if there is anyway you can make it a little bit longer that will help to improve it but I do see how you have followed the housing style of Total film reviews.Good Job.
ReplyDeleteThe layout of your film review is very similar and really realistic to the actual total film reviews as sharon previously mentioned their a a couple of grammar mistakes that you can change and also you might want to consider the fomat of your review as i naturally started to read the wrong paragraph. Good work.
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